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Excellent, It looked so Cool!
Nothing to change, except make a 3 by tommorow.
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OMG LIEK <3 TEW J00 :D
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It was done well, although I thought it should have been longer.
Oh, and what the hell was that song, who is it By?
I don't think I've ever heard it Before.
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poor mans crusade
by
demons and wizards
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The only thing that wasn't up to par with the rest, was the Quality of the Text.
You should have used more interesting fonts, and had a bit more animation in there.
the rest was excellent.
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I acctually enjoed that more than I thought I would... It was put together quite well.
Nicely done!
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I love you.
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It was quite good, the animation was mostly Smooth and the Bails + Blood were done well.
Few Pointers -
1. Get rid of Gradient Fills
2. More Detail for the Backgrounds
3. Use 16 / 14 bit sprites, the 8 Bit stuff diddnt look too good.
Also, it would have been better if insted ofjust having Megaman do the same 2 Things in the same Are each time, If maybe the First one was always a Bail, or just a Different Character.
Maybe a sort of "Horse" competition story or somthing.
Overall, it was good, but you have alot to do before you start reaching Good / Excellent Scores.
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tnx
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Ignore the other Guy, he just wanted to use that Simpsons Joke.
It was good, it has Smooth animation and an Original concept.
Its very refreshing to see somthing other than "DBZ Stick Ep. 00001" bullshit coming Through
Keep it up.
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Theres only a few things you should Improve on -
First, Id say make the movie Longer.
Second, Re-Think the Sound, Its slightly out of Sync with the movement, and Finally, Improve on the Flashed graphics.
There were a few Basic linear Fills, and the Text looked kinda plain, even though it was Animated well.
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Although, the only reason I diddnt give it a better score is because of the DBZ aspect.
You are a good animatior and you could make movies of higher quality and score.
Keep at it, but abandon the DBZ crap.
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Just a few things you should Clear up:
Gradient Fill(s)
Speech
Simpler Menu
Thats pretty Much it
A good effort tho
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ok i will update when i will publish ep2
thx for the advice!
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It could have been a bit longer, and covered the use of Graphics and Movie Clips.
Also, if you are using flash, then maybe you should Find that common button in the In-built Library whihc represents the Right-Left keys on the Keyboard.
Thats all.
Well Done!
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