I like this, there's some incredible realism going on in your FBF animation and it looks fantastic despite being monochrome and fairly short. Also I'm assuming it's meant to be a right eye, which points to the lacrimal sack (the pink bit in the corner of the eye) being slightly out of position after the first few frames, but I'm not sure if that's what it's meant to be or not.
Also your signature snaps into place like you ran out of frames to animate it in, which makes it look slightly less awesome. I'd say for a project like this in future, if you're not yet up to animating a short movie with this style (because it'd be extremely time consuming based on your animation style) to just next time create a showcase of 5-6 different pieces of animation and work on some simple actionscript (a play / replay button might be good) to give your movie a bit more interactivity.
Overall excellent animation work, can't wait to see more from you!
Thanks so much for the awesoem feedback! I'm already thinking about maybe adding a few buttons to get used to things. And yeah, that style..I just love drawing it like that, it sso fun! :)
This was good, I'm not ashamed to say I laughed. Anyway, I think you'd benefit from using a 'Play' and 'Replay' button at the start and end of the Flash, also a more comprehensive use of sound would help. Everything seems to have sound except from when the dude's face hits the floor. Also perhaps some eerie background music would go down well too.
The animation of the trip is well drawn, but the entire thing seems to happen quite quickly, perhaps increase your framerate and spend more time animating to produce a smoother and less choppy final product.
You're doing well though, keep it up!
WILL DO BOSS!!! :)) lol
You have potential for sure, although this movie is quite rough around the edges your animation is fine. I noticed you put shadowing on Batman's face but not Pikachu's meaty carcass as well, I'd recommend spending more time and effort on having all of the artwork in your movie consistent.
Keep up the good work!
thanks dude! that means alot to me, i'm working hard at that "potential" XD
Brilliant from start to finish, 10/10.
Only thing I can say is, you need to expand on your sound effects a little bit.
Other then that, perfect.
Pretty good, but needs a Fix
There's a glitch / cheat which enables you to pretty much win instantly. Just right Click, then drag the mouse over to the finish spot.
Aside from that , the game was well made and the music was alright, so I gave it a 7.
The only thing to improve i'd say are the graphics, they look a bit simple.
Not much effort
Although the game does look and play well, I can see too many instances where you haven't put much effort in. The text was just a glow+knockout effect in Flash 8, and there was no animation when you lose.
If you jazz it up a lot, put more animation, difficulty and things like that in, you'll get a much higher score.
Well done anyway, it is a good piece of flash.
ummmmmmmmm, thanks? o.O
That is so kewl, it is my new national anthem!!!1
I WANT TO SECKS J00!!!1!!!!!1!1!1
This one is great!
Oooh, this music is cool.
I Like this.
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